"What are you doing tonight?"
"Friends are coming over
just hanging around."
And he said
"Hanging out
hanging out.
You keep hanging out with friends
and you never invite me."
We were speeding up past cars
the wind in my hair.
Boy, I thought,
what are you trying to do?
It's no good getting access
to worlds you will soon lose.
I couldn't see his face.
Wonderful writing. I especially love how you ended on the line, "I couldn't see his face." It feels very powerful, like an ending should.
ΑπάντησηΔιαγραφήThank you for this, well done.
-T
P.S. I too am Greek, though I live in the United States.
treesoftyler